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27 August 2008 @ 05:50 am
Day Nineteen of 41 Days of Metallicar ...  
Aaaannd --  a new point of view dominates my contribution to day 19 of the 41 Days of Metallicar celebration!



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Witness
 
So, tell us about this car.
 
It wasn’t no car, man. Or if it was, it was the Devil’s. The Devil’s chariot!
 
Why would you say that?
 
‘Cause it was! Look, that guy, he was shoutin’ in the middle of the road, dressed like some Sixties’ hippie. And then this car came – this big ole black car – speedin’ outa nowhere. It never slowed down; just mowed that guy down, on purpose. An’ poof! – he was gone! Just like that! There was no body or nuthin’! It was the Devil, man – took him straight to Hell!
 
Sir, had you been drinking?
 
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Hmm ... I might have to expand this one into a full story someday:  I think I see a plot bunny under those wheels ... :)

 
 
Current Mood: tiredtired
Current Music: "Dance With the Devil" by Breaking Benjamin
 
 
 
aimehpueaimehpue on August 27th, 2008 10:31 am (UTC)
Sounds great! I'd love to read that story :)
And for a civilian a spirit disappearing would look something like that. (Just like in the pilot - with Sam and Constance).
bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:02 am (UTC)
Glad you liked! I'll have to see whether the plot bunny breeds ... *grin*
raputathebuta: Impala seen in MI 1/7/08raputathebuta on August 27th, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
Heeee! Poor civie...everybody always thinks you're drunk (kinda like AltDean in WiaWSNB). Reminds me of the guy who tried to blame his DUI crash on a unicorn driving his truck.

Yes! Full story please! *pokes you with a stick*


bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:03 am (UTC)
Ow!!
whimsywinx: SN-ImpalaRescuewhimsywinx on August 27th, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC)
I love seeing the boys through other people's POVs.
bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
My first short story in the fandom was a third party POV, and I had an absolute blast writing it. It's always fun to take a step back and try to think how someone else would see our boys ...
whimsywinx: SN-Don'tPanicwhimsywinx on August 28th, 2008 12:21 am (UTC)
The one with the grave digging? I loved that one.
originalcindyroriginalcindyr on August 27th, 2008 04:37 pm (UTC)
*snickers*

Yes! Full story, please!

*doesn't poke with stick, just pouts pretty with puppy eyes*
bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:10 am (UTC)
I'll work on it, I'll work on it!
koosh2012 on August 27th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
Oooh... SuhWEET! And spicy... I love it!
bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:10 am (UTC)
Tee-hee!
grand_sophygrand_sophy on August 27th, 2008 07:31 pm (UTC)
The show may have been conceived as an exploration of urban legends, but at this point in that particular universe, Dean and Sam must be one of the most intriguing and fastest growing urban legends around, and this plays off that perspective of them perfectly. Love it!
bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:12 am (UTC)
You've got a definite point there! Kripke's fascination with urban legends effectively bred a totally new one ...
zofia27zofia27 on August 28th, 2008 12:02 am (UTC)
*is intrigued*

I think you'll have to do the story now!!!
bardicvoice: Death Star by <lj user=Cakehole_Cat>bardicvoice on August 28th, 2008 12:12 am (UTC)
I'll try - but I'm not going to commit to a time!